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    Post  Pie Sat Dec 12, 2009 5:30 pm

    As the journey of Pierre's traveling, he goes around China to find new ways to cook, and to gain respect he has to have a super chef title that people will recognize his legendary skills, which will expand his knowledge to be known as one of the greatest chef in the land. When Pierre traveled to a place called Super Chef Stadium, he saw many challengers gathered outside, waiting for the announcer of the test to begin. As rumors heard, Pierre knows that this is no ordinary test and is to be taken strictly as judges prepare to choose who is right to gain the title. Moments later a man pointed out to the door and said, “Look!, the door is opening and the judges are coming out!.” Pierre snapped out of his thoughts and started to focus on his new step to gain the title. As the judges came out of the door they said , “For those who wish to take the test to become a super chef, come grab your materials and step right in. Be Warned that this test is strict and we expect you to give off your best efforts. Any illegal attempts will be notified and you will be punished, along with the disqualification.” While the judges watched carefully, the judges caught a couple people with illegal items and were forced to not take the test. As Pierre watched the people get caught, he quickly examined himself to see if there are anything suspicious on himself, and happily excited when there is nothing wrong. Pierre has now stepped into the stadium where challengers from around China compete in the special event that was held. Pierre said, “ WOW!, this is unbelievable!”. This Stadium is filled with ovens and cooking utensils, along with the sinks on the side. The Judges prepared with a microphone and has called out “Here is the task you will be given right now. First, you all must make a high quality food. We will be testing you how much effort you put into your food to see how far skill and imagination you make. Here, next to us judges is an hourglass that gives off five hours. As the time runs out you should know the consequences. Remember!, Use your time wisely. Now!, Let's Begin!.” The Stadium has twenty people cooking and started there cooking. Half of the people didn't washed their hands when they start

    to do their creation that they thought to pass. The Judges shouted out “ You people are disqualified!, ALL of the chef knows that your hands need to be clean so germs won't go into food that make people sick.” When the Judges calls his guards that were in the stadium, they kicked out anyone who did not wash their hands when they started cooking. Pierre thought in his head “This is too harsh, but this is how society goes in this test. I must not give up and keep moving forward to my goal to become a super chef.” There are about 10 people along with Pierre that are taking the test. Everyone else started their cooking, and Pierre sat down on his station. After the distraction, he thought for about 1 hour what to cook, then he saw all of the food the others made. Most of the dishes were plain and only 1 out of every challengers showed off something interesting. As the Judges started to examines closely to other foods and taste it every plain dishes were disqualified except for 1 special food which was made by a women. The Judges said, “Even though you all made good dishes, most of you showed simple and not too creative food, while one has succeeded with a high class dragon looking tasty food,which can be eaten.” Soon after that, Pierre thought of an idea and started to cook with 2 hours remaining on the hourglass. Pierre created a big dinosaur like food that looked like a Tyrannosaurus Rex. The Judges came over to Pierre's table to examine and eat it. The Judges quietly said “ Not many people have this much imagination, but this dinosaur tastes AWESOME!. Pierre you have pass the first round!”. Now there are two challengers left, Pierre and a women. The women introduced herself to Pierre. “Hello Pierre, My name is Sandy, I am going to take that title and rule the cooking world!”. Pierre responded, “Good luck with that”. Sandy got angry with his answer and stays away from him. The Judges now called out “Okay!, there are 2 challengers left, Pierre and Sandy, now here is Round 2!. Now, you two are going to do a cooking battle!. It is where two chef compete to make food and see which of the food tastes better. There are no time limit and the game begins, Right now!” Both challenger quickly started to cook as they started to get competitive. On the left side, where Sandy is cooking, she used a bunch of ingredients and her actions were fast. Sandy has created her special spaghetti surprise. Her Spaghetti

    have a scent that attracted most of judges. On the right side, Pierre pulls out ingredients to put in his food. He used a pie dish and lots of healthy ingredients. When Pierre mixed some ingredients, he puts it in a pie dish, then puts it in the oven where it will make the food. As soon as it was finished, the pie was made, where the scent of vegetables were spread. Pierre smiled with excitement and quickly showed the judges that he was finished. Pierre said “My healthy pie will win this competition for sure!” The judges examined both Sandy's and Pierre's food carefully. Since there is 4 judges, they split up to taste the food. First, on the right side, they tasted Pierre's pie. Unexpectedly, the judges were amazed, feeling refreshed, and then became energetic. Pierre was happy with his results because he can tell by the expression of the two judges. On the left side, the other two judges tasted Sandy's special spaghetti. Strangely, the judges focused on the spaghetti, then slowly eats it. Soon the judges becomes happy and without no doubt it seemed as while they were eating, they quickly eaten too much spaghetti. Other judges tried to stop the judges from eating too much and as Pierre observed his opponent's food, he knew that something was wrong. Pierre took a tiny bite at the spaghetti, his sense of taste quickly knows the ingredients in the food and said “ Sandy!, you have no right to become a chef!. You have illegally drugged your food!.” Sandy was shocked and tries to make excuses. The Judges replied “Sandy, I'm sorry but, your food is disqualified. You have illegally put opium in your food and obviously, Pierre!, is the winner and gains the Super Chef Title!.” The guards that sent from the judges took Sandy in prison. Pierre gladly said “YEAH!, my pie rules this competition!”. The Judges gave Pierre a suit that was made to recognize his high skill of his ability. In the end the judges said to Pierre “Now that your a Super Chef, what are you going to do now?”. Pierre replied “ I am going to create tons of Pies and other food that can create happiness across China!”. And so, Pierre followed his dreams and successfully showed the people that his foods can create many people happy.
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    Post  Goreblood Tue Jan 12, 2010 5:45 pm

    lol i like

    funny, and nicely written!

    How the heck did you get a B on it!?!?

    Im gonna kick that teachers... Wait not forum appropriate XD
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    Post  Pie Tue Jan 12, 2010 9:24 pm

    There were a lot of mechanic errors... like how the character talks ...And something else I kinda forgotten.
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    Post  Goreblood Tue Jan 12, 2010 10:30 pm

    yeah i c the mechanic errors, but still, good story XD

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